Storytelling and writing are talents that transcend age — not everyone has them, but those who do, can shine at any stage of life. This is evident from the extraordinary skills of Arshaan Lakhani, who recently turned 10. His first attempt at writing a storybook, Kidnapped, at the age of nine a few months ago, showcases an engaging tale filled with adventure, thrill, suspense, fun and deep emotions.

Kidnapped is a short story book with concise chapters that unravel mystery after mystery, and also with engaging illustrations that keep readers hooked until the very end. While going through the book, I was amazed by the young author’s ability to portray complex emotions through the innocent perspective of a child.

The story begins with Oliver family’s struggle after losing their inheritance to a gambling aunt. Narrated by Adam, one of Oliver’s 14 children — a wise and brave boy with a deeper understanding than the others. Due to their circumstances, the Oliver family is forced to work under cruel employers, but they eventually find better conditions with the kind-hearted Mr and Mrs Jones. Soon there is a subtle change in Mr Oliver and he suddenly announces that they are moving to Rome. Adam and his sister Amelia grow suspicious of his uncharacteristic behaviour —raising doubts in the readers as well.

From here, a thrilling journey filled with unexpected twists and turns begins; Lakhani cleverly builds suspense through the children’s increasing doubt about their father’s identity.

The major twist comes when we come to know that Oliver, the real father is searching for his children in London, while someone has impersonated him and taken all the kids with him to Rome (thus, the kidnapping). This sophisticated plot development is rarely seen in writers this young. The contrasting portrayal of the real, loving Oliver versus the cruel impostor reveals the author’s understanding of character dynamics. We soon learn that the kidnapper is ruthless, who forces the children them into criminal activities.

But keeping the tone light at some points, the young author adds a little humour with his simple, yet vivid, descriptions of his 13 siblings. He gives distinctive personalities to several characters, particularly Adam, Amelia and Alessandra. The close bond between the siblings feels authentic, especially during emotional moments.

The narrative flows between two parallel storylines: the children’s adventures and crimes in Rome and the real Oliver’s desperate search in London.

The subtle use of idioms, similes and phrases demonstrates exceptional descriptive ability. The descriptions of food, clothing and locations show great attention to detail and the author’s sense of worldliness.

The book tackles complex themes, including family bonds and loyalty among siblings, trust versus suspicion, the contrast between appearances and reality, staying steadfast in difficult situations and the importance of hope when facing adversity.

Will Adam and his siblings find their real father, or will they ever uncover the truth? That’s for you to discover, as every detail will keep you questioning everything you think you know right up until the final revelation.

Published in Dawn, Young World, March 1st, 2025

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