Inspired as much by the soz and marsiya tradition that had flowered in the Awadh region as by the many retellings of the Ram Katha in the folk tradition, the poem is full of poetic imagery of a son — a much-loved ‘ideal’ son — taking leave of his mother as he embarks on a journey of honour and commitment, taking with him nothing from his princely home save his mother’s blessings and the assurance that as long as he has the grace and favour of the Almighty, even the wilderness can be as favourable as a mother’s presence.
Uska karam shareek hai to gham nahii
Daamaan-e dasht daaman-e maadar se kam nahii
(If one has His divine blessings one can know no sorrow
The hem of wilderness is no less than a mother’s hem)
A non-judgmental account of ‘Sita-Haran’
Certain incidents from the Ramayana fired the imagination of the poet and the creative writer more than others. Just as the exile and stay in the jungle or ban-bas (variously spelt as banwas) became a metaphor for all sorts of wanderings in strange lands and all manner of hardship, so too did Sita’s abduction by Raavan, her crossing of the ‘Lakshman Rekha’ and the notion of ‘a stain upon a woman’s honour’ that abduction has always meant for a woman.
In ‘Sita Haran’ by Munshi Banwari Lal Shola we see a fairly conventional narration of events:
- of Sita spotting the golden deer
- of becoming enamoured by its beauty (its magnificent horns and hooves) that is narrated in great detail
- of the entrapment planned by the wily Raavan
- of Lakshman first telling Sita that no harm can come to Ram, but eventually going off in pursuit of his brother after instructing Sita to stay safe within the confines of the marital home
- of Raavan appearing in the guise of a hungry Brahman seeking alms
- and the simple, kind-hearted Sita stepping out of the boundary drawn by Lakshman to feed the hungry fakir.
The poem is remarkable for its completely non-judgmental tone and a sequential, though poetic, narration of events.
Bahar jo kundli se chaliin dhoka khaa gayii
Raavan ke chhal mein hai maharani aa gayii
(The moment she stepped out of the circle she was entrapped
Hai, the queen was beguiled by the deception of Raavan)
We know about Sita. What about Urmila?
Yet another poem, entitled ‘Ram’ by Rahbar Jaunpuri, while enumerating the many good qualities including his love for peace, harmony and truth, tells us why the land of Hindustan is proud of him.
In walking the path of loyalty, Ram has become an enduring symbol of self-sacrifice just as Raavan has come to embody the ‘shar-pasand’, those who like evil.
Rasm-o-rivaaj-e Ram se aari hain shar-pasand
Raavan ki nitiyon ke pujari hain shar-pasand
(Those who like evil are bereft of the traditions of Ram
They are the worshippers of the practices of Raavan)
Occasionally, it’s the ‘smaller’ stories of the lesser-known characters that seize the poetic imagination. Sita, who accompanied her husband and brother-in-law in exile, forsaking the luxuries of the royal palace, is one of the principal dramatis personae, but what of Urmila — the wife of Lakshman and younger sister of Sita?